Aeris
Score: Strong
Beautiful poem, Aeris! Your rendition of the Cage Bird Sings was peaceful, graceful, and powerful at the same time. Your performance had a great flow and serenity that was really nice to listen to. Thank you for sharing and being a part of the Peach Blossom Festival!
Hi Aeris,
Congratulations on performing for the Peach Blossom. I understand it can be scary to read to a poem. I am much older than you and I still become nervous before I give a speech in my Communications class. In the future, if possible, try to memorize the poem so you can more eye contact with the viewer. It is important to pronounce clearly and to use the power of your voice. I look to your performance next year.
Magnificent performance! You were very confident and clear when you spoke. It was a beautiful poem that demonstrated many descriptive words. You had great pronunciations! I congratulate you for all your hard work and dedication !